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I remember getten in the car
As we buckle up to go on our way
Couple guys pull up and posted a street race
So we joined in and raced
We thought it would be fun and games
Until he lost control
As we were spinning
Screaming for our lives
Then all of a sudden our lives flashed before us
Out of no where we slammed into a tree
I didn't get to say, "i love you," to my family and friends
I stand there staring at my body
My body laying there stiff
I finally realized that I was dead
My friend's stiff body lay next to mine
I look around to see where my other friend is
I realized that it was not his time to go
Not mad that it had happen
I can't blame him for this
We all had apart in this
We both are looking down from heaven
Watching over family and friends
We both want to say we lovw you to them
Wish we were there with you
Got to go I hear someone callin out to me....
                              Brittany





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» left by Susan Thom (8,669)
Susan Thom
(176 days 4 hours ago.)

Reader Rating: 5 out of 5
hi brittany,
very clever, and very disturbing. my aunt just went to a funeral for a 15 and a 16 year old girl, killed while drag racing in texas. this was yesterday.
i like how you worded your piece.
keep writing,
best regards,
sue thom
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» left by Brittany Stoudt (0) (171 days 14 hours ago.)
Hi Susan,
Thank you for the comment. Im sorry to hear that, you are starting to hear that more over the news now. Just wanted to say thank you again, N sorry about your aunt.
Brittany Stoudt

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