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It was fall. The old man had made 81 years. Seventy years he had hunted the wily deer of the Carolina lowlands. Seventy seasons since his father had given him the 12 gauge L.C. Smith double barrel shotgun that rested across his lap. Seventy good seasons in the forests.  Some years had been plentiful in the deer harvest, some sort of lean…just like life...some years were good with lots of achievement...some had their low valleys.  But the seasons always came around and each fall was good. Memories, the mind held the memories neatly folded and filed in appropriate cubbyholes; each one released, triggered by the smell of woodsmoke in the frosty air of fall, the busy hum of a spring bee, the barking of a hound….

He heard the dog. The wail of the hound's cry was carried by the wind across the savannah. "Still aways off", the old man thought. He shifted his seat on the oak stump,attempting to restore the circulation in the old legs that didn't move as quickly now. 

The hound cried again. The old man lifted his head in anticipation and like the quarry that he hunted, he turned his head into the wind, tilting it back, savoring the air in his nostrils, scenting, listening for the deer.

He had been born Southern, in the PeeDee region of South Carolina. Being Southern he placed great value on honor, family, religion, good dogs and guns, Case knives, and just every once in a while, a sip or two of 10 year Old Charter whiskey.  His grandfather had followed Robert Lee to Gettysburg and on to the surrender at Appomattox, Virginia, then on home to help rebuild the South. Some things never changed and the South of 1865 was still evident now.  Honor...

The dog sounded again, closer this time; and in the distance the old man could hear the chorus of the pack following the lead hound. The chase was heating up; the pack of hounds was in full cry now, the end of this hunt was nearing.

Softly, the old man opened the breech of the shotgun and checked his shells and then closed the gun. The first rays of the morning sun pierced the foliage overhead and warmed his cheek. He eased his right hand into his jacket pocket, warming his gnarled fingers. A gray squirrel scampered across the trail in front of the old man and clawed its way up a towering pine and paused to bark at the intruder that occupied his favorite nut chomping stump.

"Maggie liked squirrels", he thought.  "Pretty, Maggie was, from the first time we met at a street dance in Conwayborough.  Crossed over now, some ten years ago. Fine woman, best of the best. We raised good kids, too.  Two daughters"

The cry of the hounds woke him from his reverie. "Ol buck veered south a little.  He'll turn back once he hits the edge of White Oak Swamp." He could feel his heart now, the juices of life beginning to flow, the anticipation of the ambush, the kill. "Calm down", he thought, "You've done this hundreds of times. Yeah, but the feeling is always the same, the same excitement, the same anticipation."

"His daughter Sandy, blonde, like Maggie, always got fidgety long bout this time when the dogs began to get close. Liked to hunt, she did.  Married, moved to Denver.  Doesn't hunt much anymore, too involved in her work. Don't see her often, several years now, but she writes, every week."

A twig snapped seventy-five, no, closer to a hundred yards away. The fresh wind brought the sound of the hound pack to the old man. "Closer, they really covered some ground in a hurry...."

Brown, almost a shadow, the grand old buck stepped out of the thicket and into the open beneath the oaks. Regal, his antlers majestic, he thrust his neck forward, his horns back, and tested the air. The cry of the hounds caused him to look their way. He stamped a forefoot, tossed his head, and looked toward the old man.

"Aren't you something. Fourteen points at least. You've been about a bit, too, haven't you, ol boy." 
"The boom of the old L.C. Smith reverberated through the forest. Slowly, his shotgun held at ready, the old man approached.  The buck lay against a log, regal in repose.  The hunter counted the points, fourteen strong points, the buck's winter coat prime, a record trophy.  His legs weak from the surge of adrenalin, the hunter seated himself on the log next to the old buck and leaned against a tree.  Slowly, he laid the old shotgun across his lap, reached for his hunting horn and blew three short blasts, signaling the end of the hunt.

We found him that way. Asleep we thought, leaning against that tree.  I suspect that Maggie was pleased to see him, hugged him close, just like she always did when he returned home from the hunt. 

©2008 Ted Gragg. All Rights Reserved Worldwide.


Ted Gragg, author of the fast paced novel, "Puma", currently serves as CEO of Myrtle Beach Indoor Shooting Range where he continues to pursue his hands on love affair with firearms and military history. His former writings include many short stories for wildlife and hunting sports periodicals as well as technical manuals and historical research papers. His search for an elusive Confederate gunboat scuttled in 1865 on South Carolina’s Great Pedee River led to the successful founding of the C.S.S. Pedee Research and Recovery Team. Some of this team’s work is highlighted in the up-coming sequel to "Puma". For more information, please visit: http://www.flatriverrockpublishing.com




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» left by Marty RicKard (2,452) Bronze Level Author Verified Account
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Reader Rating: 5 out of 5
Dear Ted: Beautifully written. Great imagery. Reminds me a little of my story: A Bad Goodbye, which is also on Search Warp. Best to you, Marty RicKard

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» left by Ted L. Gragg (60 days 6 hours ago.)
Marty, thank you for the glorious comment. I read your "A Bad Goodbye" just now. You definitely have had to milk a cow to experience those sentiments. That's how brothers tell who is the most dominate...by who wins the milk squirting fight on cold frosty mountain mornings. These are pictures, nay, paintings of the American past that is fast disappearing with each suburban outgrowth. Thanks for reminding me and others that our future is rooted in the past.

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» left by sue thom from nj (58 days 8 hours ago.)
Reader Rating: 5 out of 5
hi ted,
you defintiely have a gift for writing. i would have read this in book form. everything was there: feelings, thoughts, emotions, imagery, scenery, i enjoyed it very much. don't like hunting, though, i gotta tell you, but this was more about the man i think, than the actual act. thanks for sharing,
best regards,
sue thom

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» left by Ted L. Gragg (57 days 21 hours ago.)
Hello Sue, thank you for your compliment.   I grew up hunting, beginning in the mountains of N.C. at the age of 6.  My family always increased their table fare by the taking of wild game and my Father would never approve of hunting just for a trophy.   Any animal taken in fair chase or on the trap lines had to be used completely.    I still teach this today to my children and grandchildren.   But yes, the story was about the man and the hunting is just a small part.   Thanks again for your gracious comments.     Ted

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