» left by Avis Ward(10,234) Avis Ward (136 days 18 hours ago.)
David, this is great! I have a saying that many of us are not standing on the promises but sitting on the premises. I loved the part about the fruit of our labor is for our neighbor! So very true, David. Respond to this comment
» left by Jane Bullard (136 days 16 hours ago.)
David, I was very touched by the thoughts and the tone of this poem. I especially liked the last two lines--a true and hopeful ending. Respond to this comment
» left by Janice LeCroy (136 days 6 hours ago.) This is a wonderful poem David..... Sometimes, we forget to give praise to the one who made everything possible.... We need to praise his name, and give thanks to him everyday.....Very touching...
» left by sue thom from nj (136 days ago.)
hi david,
i have read all of your poems and articles, i believe, in the past 2 years, and this poem stands out to me, to be your absolute best. it is beautiful, and filled with the true meaning of life. i bet it just flowed from your fingertips, or at least that's how fluently it sounds.
» left by David Tanguay(7,597) David Tanguay (136 days ago.)
Well thank you Susan, actually I didn't think this poem was very good myself. But I'm glad you enjoyed it.
» left by Teresa Ortiz(4,719) Teresa Ortiz (135 days 16 hours ago.)
Hi David, this is beautiful! I not only stand on His promises, I count on them! :-)
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