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Deep in darkness locked away,
chains have enslaved them day after day.
Troubles and torments regrets from the past,
how heavy the chains, how tight its grasp.
Longing for freedom these prisoners cry,
disguising their fears not wanting to die.
I see them walking with bravado and swagger,
old age will come, death like a hammer.
 
 
Darker and darker these prisoners slip,
lost at sea with no sail on a ship.
Locked away in their torment, there's no sight- they are blind,
Regretful memories,drives the them out of their minds.
I see them walking with bravado and swagger,
old age will come,death like a hammer.
 
They are blind so leave them, unwilling to hear,
feeding their hearts with anger and fear.
Their smiles are phony masking their past,
hurting continually, they feel first but are last.
I see them not walking no bravado, no swagger,
death came sudden, now their life doesn't matter.





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» left by Sandra E. Graham (2,288)
Sandra E. Graham
from Paragould, Ar USA (72 days 4 hours ago.)

Reader Rating: 5 out of 5
Very nice, Rodney. I'm not sure who you were seeing, but I see a host of lost souls who won't give up their pomposity even to rid themselves of the misery of their own creation.---------but that's just my take.
 
Wonderfully written, at any rate.
 
Sandra

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Rodney Biamby
(70 days 5 hours ago.)

Thank you for your kind words I enjoyed your comments.
                                                                     Rodney

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» left by Fern Biamby from Delaware (70 days 17 hours ago.)
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Baby...this is awesome...you continue to amaze me at how you can see things in others and always wanting the best for them...I love you

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Rodney Biamby
(70 days 5 hours ago.)

To my loving wife thank you honey for your love and support in my writing career
I love you.
                                                                                                     Your Loving Husband   
                                                                                                              Rodney.

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» left by Michelle Mackin (4,004)
Michelle Mackin
(64 days 12 hours ago.)

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Hi Rodney,
 
I see many people whom I cry for when I read this. I don't just see physical death, but spiritual death which is even worse.
 
God bless youu always,

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Rodney Biamby
(64 days 11 hours ago.)

Thank you your comments and the insight .
                                                  
                                                     Rodney

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» left by sue thom from nj (8 days 1 hour ago.)
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hi rodney,
 
this is deep and hearfelt and filled with feeling and truths under the surface. i don't know how i missed it.
 
it's hard to keep up with every article of everyone, but yours are definitely special.
 
my best to you,
 
sue

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» left by Rodney (7 days 20 hours ago.)
Thank you Sue,
Your comments mean alot to me.
 
                                                               Thanks Coach.

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