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The Delusion Thread

The Humbled

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John lives in a very small house on a side street in a mid-size American city. He lives a very unassuming life, by himself, and spends most of his time working on his little garden and his house. He has a vehicle made in America, although to be fair it wasn't so much a buy-American thing as it was simply what he wanted. The fact the vehicle is American is irrelevant to him.

John goes to the movies every so often, takes himself out to dinner twice a week, goes to church, and pretty much keeps to himself. Single, in his mid-forties, he still keeps in touch with some friends from the old days, but not so much anymore. Instead, he works, reads, works on his garden, and enjoys life to the fullest.

John hangs a flag outside of his house. He placed it to the right of his front door, and everyone who drives by his little house sees his flag and his house and thinks what they think. What they think is of little concern to John. During the holidays he also keeps a 'Merry Christmas' wreath on his front door. It's small and unassuming, befitting its owner. As with the flag, people who see this think what they will.

One day last week, a man and woman stopped in front of John's house. John was working on his garden when the man called out to him.

"Hi," John said, removing his gloves. He shook the man's hand, then the woman's. "How do you do?"

"This is your house?" the woman asked, nodding to the house.

"Yes."

"Are you a Republican?" the man asked, relying on the myth liberals probably do not have flags flying in front of their houses. This same myth says liberals do not celebrate the true meaning of Christmas. Strange the man would ask that as a greeting, John thought.

"No," John replied. He noticed both his visitors seemed to be looking at the flag.

"Then why do you fly this thing?" the woman asked, referring to the flag. "And why do you have that thing?" the man asked, nodding to the wreath.

"Because I'm an American."

"You can't be serious," the man said then. "You are proud to be an American with a lying criminal in the white house, a war that's killing thousands of Iraqis a month, and an economy in trouble? And you are celebrating an old ritual commercialized by greedy corporations?"

"I was born here," John said, looking at the two. "I was raised here, and I will die here." He smiled a small smile. "I am an American," he repeated.

"And the wreath?" the man asked.
 
"All men are brothers," John replied. "Merry Christmas," he added, smiling a small smile.

"You wish us a Merry Christmas in spite of what we just said?"

"No," John said softly. "Because of what you just said."
 

Born in New York City, Michael Ramzy was raised in the Middle East. Beirut, Lebanon was his first home until age 13, then on to Tehran, Iran. At fifteen, Michael moved to Saudi Arabia, then finally ended up in America.

He worked in the computer industry as a programmer until he decided he wanted to try to understand people better, so he took a job as a waiter at a Denny's restaurant.
 
Oops.

He spent the next several years as a waiter, manager, and finally General Manager of a local Denny's. He is now an executive assistant manager (EXA) with Walgreens Drug Stores

Michael has written and published numerous short stories and novels, and figured it was about time to sell them.

Michael Ramzy now lives in Austin, Texas with his girlfriend of two years Shari and two dogs, Scrabbles and Sputnik.  His site is delusionthread.com.



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» left by robert melaccio sr (328 days 13 hours ago.)
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Michael I noticed not too many responses yet let me try to express this if it can be? Someone elected the man in the White House and someone elected the man to soon be there. Now the fact that you love your country has nothing to do with what these men do or don't and what this nation is experiencing. It actually says more about we who put them there to do what they do or didn't then why  or how we love our nation. No you are a symbol of real America, its diversity and your statements in sign and words are all about the nation you and many of us love. We love americda and can remain proud in her even while those we put our faith and trust in commit sin, or crime ot greed. So if we are not happy with that eladership then don't complain, change them. It si evident by this last elcetion many are happy. Best. Wishes

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» left by Michael Ramzy (641)
Michael Ramzy
(328 days 9 hours ago.)

You are mostly correct. Love of country and faith have little to do with the current (or future) occupant of the White House. This short was written in response to the incredible divisiveness of this country in the past few years. It seems if you have a flag, you are a gun-totin neocon. If you don't have a flag (or, in the case of the past election, if you refuse to wear a simple lapel pin) you are considered unpatriotic. If you question anything the government does, you are considered unpatriotic.
It's sad this is what we have become (or allowed ourselves to become), and this story tries to show a simple man who loves God and his country without pretense or politicizing anything, and how this man gets the 'what is your motive?' treatment. There are still some who do things simply because they believe. Faith is not exclusive to religion, as we know. Funny how often many forget that.
Thanks for your comment, and keep reading and writing.
Michael

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» left by Avis Ward (11,504)
Avis Ward
(328 days 5 hours ago.)

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Michael, I liked John's answers at the end. They were Christ-like which means they were filled with love, humility and nonjudgmental. Excellent writing, thank you. Welcome to SearchWarp. A Merry Christmas to you and Shari. 
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» left by Michael Ramzy (641)
Michael Ramzy
(328 days 3 hours ago.)

Thanks very much. I appreciate your thoughts. Merry Christmas to you and yours as well.

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» left by sue thom from nj (327 days 15 hours ago.)
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hi michael,
 
this was a well written, interesting and intriguing story.
 
i don't like how dreads look on young kids, but my son has them, nor do i like piercings and tattoos, but my kids have had or have them. but i still love love my kids with total mind, heart, and soul. it's called "letting others be who they want to be, as long as they aren't hurting themselves or others." my prayers wish all God's children could be non judgmental and proud to be alive.
thanks for the great article,
 
welcome to searchwarp, and i hope you continue writing,
 
best regards,
 
sue thom

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» left by Michael Ramzy (327 days 9 hours ago.)
Thanks very much for reading. Have a Merry Christmas.

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» left by David Tanguay (9,634)
David Tanguay
(327 days 14 hours ago.)

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Enjoyed reading your article Mike

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» left by Michael Ramzy (327 days 9 hours ago.)
Thanks very much. Merry Christmas.

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