(It is an emotional expression of Mrs. Asmita Patra, thats me. Sometimes I think if I would not have a God like the God I have right now what would have happened to me? Where would have I been? In today's world we don't think about God, Spirituality etc. much, infact we need Him more these days. I am really grateful to Him and I am what I am all because of HIM)
Asmita Patra is married and from India. She teaches the kids in a small school. She is the wife of Chiradeep. She publishes a booklet 'CANDLES' along with her husband. She is a singer and always ready to sing for the Almighty.
Hi Asmita, by the way, I love your name! This is a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it. It's good to see so many new members to SW from India, and especially, I love that I am meeting more brothers and sisters in Christ as well. It is just proof that Christianity is for all nations. Keep sharing. I bet you have an incredible voice. Keep praising dear sister! Teresa
Hello - I can feel the heart-felt connection - and that is always good to share. It's easy to forget the great power in connecting to our Source - however you conceive that to be.
Thanks for writing and expressing yourself! Cheryl
» left by Suzy Miller from Midwest USA (231 days 13 hours ago.)
Excellent write and the title is perfect "His Presence." I actually have a poet friend whose nickname is the same. You've pleasantly shared the perfect essence of having a loving relationship with God ~ you can't get any more inspirational and personal than that. Blessings! Suz
I don't write poem. But it was an experience I penned down and my husband helped to bring it to a poetry form. I need to learn writing poem from you...Thanks for the comment...
Great work Asmita, I have to second what Teresa says, I love your name. and I loved the poem.....so full of meaning, and heartfelt. I hope you will write more, and welcome to SearchWarp. I look forward to reading more of your work.....Your friend in pen, and fan......Gary.
God Bless You Asmita. Wonderful poem. A heartfelt poetic sonnet written straight from the love you hold within for our Savior. Continue to write, stay encouraged, and know that in the Kingdom of God everything already rhymes. :-)
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