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Ken McCreless

Thread- part II

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II

She was easy enough to follow, her threadbare dress stood out like a lighthouse on an isolated shore. She had made it herself, several sewing lessons short of mediocre.

Anyone with any fashion sense at all would question her choice of cloth. Even brand new it was a bland, off-white fabric with barely distinguishable streaks of color. It was not new when she made the dress with it, however.

She had found it while searching the alley behind the county morgue. It had been used by the local EMS service as a pitiful shroud for those found dead without any kind of identification. The faint streaks of color had taken a hit from the massive amounts of bleach it took to overcome the blood stains from countless uses.

But she loved it. She felt the power of the human spirits that had gazed down upon the lifeless vehicle they once used to tool around the earth, through the cloth that she now wore.

She felt safe wearing that dress, taking it off only long enough to wash it. Even then, she wore a large swatch of the leftover cloth as a scarf.

The power of the cloth was being tested as she walked along. Something was wrong, some evil was after her, but she dare not look around. Her goal was to get home.

Jack kept pace with her. His knew how things would turn out, that she would be his to use as he saw fit, to drink her life and create jewelry with her dental work.

There would have to be a change, though. He felt a sense of imminent boredom. It was just too easy. Where was the challenge?

She stopped, turning in a slow and deliberate manner, until her eyes locked onto his. That was the only time Jack had felt unsure, and even then it was but a split second, and was dismissed just as quick.

It diverted his attention long enough for her to slip from his sight.

Frustrated, Jack looked around as if mentally recording every detail of his surroundings.

I am not stealing from you, I am retrieving that which was stolen from me.

Jack shook as the words were whispered into his soul-less spirit. He was even startled by the sound of his bracelet as he spun around, wanting to find the source of this message.

He stood motionless for several minutes, calming himself. He had been close enough to her to get a lock on her blood scent, and he now used that memory to determine the direction of her flight.

There would be no deviation from his original plan. She holds no power over me, he thought aloud.

His confidence was so high he did not notice that his necklace had become shorter in length, that a few of the teeth had fused together.



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» left by Isaac Bennett (3) (14 days 3 hours ago.)
Reader Rating: 4 out of 5
Dude, nice! makes me wanna see the next parts! but i'll also need to backtrack to the start! Keep'em coming. God Bless!

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» left by Ken McCreless (1,710)
Ken McCreless
(12 days 15 hours ago.)

Thank you, Isaac. It's a new venue for me and I'm glad you liked it! 

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» left by Marijo Phelps (2,696)
Marijo Phelps
(14 days 1 hour ago.)

Reader Rating: 4 out of 5
I think I am jumping into this in the middle - on vacation and need to go back and find your first piece. Intriguing! Mareijio

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» left by Ken McCreless (1,710)
Ken McCreless
(12 days 15 hours ago.)

Hi MariJo.
 
"Thread" was a fun challenge!

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» left by Debi Strong (192) (13 days 22 hours ago.)
Reader Rating: 4 out of 5
Strange but compelling. I would read the continuation, evn though I'm not a fan of horror.

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» left by Ken McCreless (1,710)
Ken McCreless
(12 days 15 hours ago.)

I'm not a fan of horror either. Oh, wait, yes I am!
 
"Strange" is a quite compliment to me!
Thanks for stopping by.
 
 

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» left by Lorrie Davids (7,565)
Lorrie Davids
(13 days 22 hours ago.)

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Ken, this is creepy! I like it! Now, I need to go back and read the first installment of your series.

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» left by Ken McCreless (1,710)
Ken McCreless
(12 days 15 hours ago.)

Thank you, Lorrie!
 
This is a new road for me. Let's see where it goes ...

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» left by Pedro Cardoso (0) (12 days 5 hours ago.)
Reader Rating: 4 out of 5
Lovely writing! Is there a third part to this story? Do let me know.

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» left by Ken McCreless (1,710)
Ken McCreless
(11 days 22 hours ago.)

Thank you so much!
 
Thread part III is on SearchWarp for your reading pleasure.

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» left by Connor Davidson (4,965)
Connor Davidson
(12 days 4 hours ago.)

Reader Rating: 5 out of 5
Great article. Well done.
 
 
Just me again (see part 3)

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» left by Ken McCreless (1,710)
Ken McCreless
(11 days 22 hours ago.)

Thank you, Connor.

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» left by Michael Ramzy (641)
Michael Ramzy
(11 days 6 hours ago.)

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You are entering into a darker place here, Ken, and yet you are doing it with ease. This is wonderful.

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» left by Ken McCreless (1,710)
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(10 days 23 hours ago.)

It is new ground for me, for sure. I do feel comfortable with it, though.
 
Thank you so much for reading and responding, Michael.

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» left by Ronyae (4,601) (10 days 22 hours ago.)
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Ken, you are an excellent storyteller. I'm hooked (smile). Thanks for continuing the excitement.

» left by Ken McCreless (1,710)
Ken McCreless
(9 days 2 hours ago.)

Wow, thank you, Ronyae! I'm blushing here!

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» left by Linda DeWitt (1,944)
Linda DeWitt
(8 days 16 hours ago.)

I read part lll first so I had to backtrack and although I not a horror fan I thought it was excellent.

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» left by Ken McCreless (1,710)
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(6 days 23 hours ago.)

Thank you, Linda, I appreciate it!

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