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Submitted Monday, October 26, 2009
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Love is an ocean wide,

filled with tears that we cry...

Never knowing when is the next tide,

or when our hearts will run dry...

I feel the wind blowing through my soul,

I hold on tight, never letting it go

I ride the waves that life in me bestow,

and when i crash I'll let you know,

how this pain can brake one's heart,

but eventually from it will depart...

So keep traveling this ocean wide,

keeping God right by your side.

So please don't ever hesitate,

we only have one life, make your own fate.

Love is like the ocean, goes on for miles,

it is beautiful, it is rough, but it is worth our wile.

Find the rainbow that births from the sea,

love is the treasure at the end that will set you free.

And when you can't see where the ocean's end,

like love and pain, ocean and sky just blends.

It's a game of give and take

and many times one heart will brake

Bring tears to your eyes,

filling in that ocean wide

hurt and beauty no one denies,

but a picture perfect inside hide

an everlasting feeling for you and me

the most imperfect perfection two will get to be.

Riding the waves of love crazy seas...

Alessandro Monte. 10/22/2009 (c)



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» left by Jean Horst (1,191)
Jean Horst
(1 day 12 hours ago.)

Reader Rating: 4 out of 5
Hey Allessandro,
 
I'm not exactly sure what happened with this poem... it's really good!

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» left by Alessandro Monte from Fort Myers, FL (1 day 12 hours ago.)
lol, what do you mean? Is my other writings bad?

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» left by Jean Horst (1,191)
Jean Horst
(1 day 11 hours ago.)

Haha, no, your other writings aren't bad, but they are sometimes difficult to read/understand without the punctuation and spacing. I know you write from your cell - which I'm pretty sure I couldn't do! However, this poem was spaced well, the rhythms nice - well done, so your rating should have reflected that! Good Work! :)

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» left by Alessandro Monte (92) (1 day 11 hours ago.)
Thank you I will keep on trying to improve and learn, have a wonderful day!

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