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» left by Ronyae ^(4,519) (9 days 19 hours ago.)

WOW, Ken. Scary thought, but very interesting read. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (9 days 8 hours ago.)

Thank you so much, Ronyae. I do love to write!

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» left by Marijo Phelps ^(2,761)
Marijo Phelps (9 days 17 hours ago.)

Where do you get all these ideas? This was a grabber for sure! Marijo

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (9 days 8 hours ago.)

I'm not sure where the ideas come from exactly, Marijo. I'm just glad they come!

 

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» left by Paul Schroeder from nyc (9 days 13 hours ago.)

You're still fighting mental health! These are the writings of a man a week away from a rifle and a rooftop! Electric insights into madness:Thanks!:Paul Schroeder

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (9 days 8 hours ago.)

They only truly insane are those who think they're not! Right?

 

Thank you, Paul!

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» left by Paul Schroeder ^(1,617) (5 days 8 hours ago.)

it's scary, but you're most correct!

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» left by Connor Davidson ^(5,131)
Connor Davidson (9 days 12 hours ago.)

Great story. Well done.

 

Bing! Bing! What a crazy guy.

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (9 days 8 hours ago.)

Who, me? Weird is good!

 

Thank you, Connor.

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» left by Lorrie Davids ^(7,484)
Lorrie Davids (9 days 11 hours ago.)

Ken - What an ending! I had NO clue until the last line! Great story!

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (9 days 8 hours ago.)

Thank you, Lorrie! I really enjoyed writing it.

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» left by Joel Hendon ^(16,285)
Joel Hendon (9 days 11 hours ago.)

Wow, Ken. A good job of building a quick but thorough episode of something or other? Interesting.

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (9 days 8 hours ago.)

Thank you, Joel, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. It was just a thought that grew!

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» left by Carolyn Tytler ^(5,906) (9 days 10 hours ago.)

Great story!

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (9 days 8 hours ago.)

Thank you, Carolyn. It was SO fun to write!

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» left by Ben Jones ^(6,856)
Ben Jones (9 days 4 hours ago.)

Amusing twist, thanks for sharing.

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (6 days 12 hours ago.)

Thank you, Ben, I appreciate the support.

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» left by Nick Bryant ⁽³⁶⁵⁾ (8 days 11 hours ago.)

Would love to see the book! Clever idea. Short but sweet

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (6 days 12 hours ago.)

Thank you, Nick. The book is in the works!

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» left by carolee ⁽¹⁶⁰⁾
carolee (7 days 11 hours ago.)

I thought this was a good article. I enjoyed reading it. Some of the best authors just enjoy writting. Thats a good start.

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (6 days 12 hours ago.)

It is the best start, right? Thanks for stopping by!

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» left by Debi Strong ⁽¹⁸³⁾ (7 days 7 hours ago.)

Hi Ken,

 

This was a good Halloween story..kind of creepy. Not the kind of stuff I normally read, but it was well done!

 

Thanks,

 

Debi

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (6 days 12 hours ago.)

Thank you so much, Debi. I like to mix it up once in a while!

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» left by Ruth Stewart ⁽¹⁵⁾ (6 days 20 hours ago.)

I really like this, I enjoy this sort of assumption based story, it is good that people are keeping it alive. Well done. Get a website though, because if you love writing it would be great for people to be able to read it. Try http://www.devhub.com for really easy website building. (That isnt an affiliate link btw, it is just a good idea)

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (6 days 12 hours ago.)

I had no idea it was an "assumption based" story. I just wrote it as I saw it.

 

I do have a website. kenmccreless dot com

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» left by Michael Ramzy ⁽⁶³³⁾
Michael Ramzy (6 days 14 hours ago.)

Excellent! While reading I was wondering if you were taking your vitamins or eating right, then I realized your brain somehow functions in a separate dimension. This is very short and subtle and at the same time intense (if that makes sense). Well done.

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (6 days 12 hours ago.)

Don't tell anybody, ok?

 

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» left by Paul Schroeder ^(1,617) (6 days 13 hours ago.)

Tell me,Ken,that you're NOT a week away from a rooftop and a rifle with this chilling story!It was a well written peek into a mind of madness;is there more to this story? Cant't wait to read it!Paul Schroeder

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (6 days 12 hours ago.)

I have no plans for a sequel, but, who knows? The Muse is a merciless taskmaster indeed.

 

Thank you,, Paul.

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» left by Paul Schroeder ^(1,617) (6 days 12 hours ago.)

The sound effects;"bing,bing,bing" were also chillinghly realistic wow:Paul

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (5 days 8 hours ago.)

Thank you, Paul; I spared NO expense!

 

Look out, Spielberg, Carpenter and Tarantino!!!!

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» left by Linda DeWitt ^(1,890)
Linda DeWitt (6 days 9 hours ago.)

Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your article. Thanks for sharing your imagination and wit.

 

Linda D

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (5 days 8 hours ago.)

Thank you, Linda. I really appreciate the support!

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» left by Nenita Wells ^(1,435)
Nenita Wells (3 days 15 hours ago.)

The ending was a bit unexpected (that is why this is good, element of surprise). Is he really dead? if he is, there is no sequel. Thanks for sharing Ken. It was a great read, concise but it had all the elements of a good thriller.

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (1 day 5 hours ago.)

Yes, he is dead. Anyone who can't tell the difference between the sound a computer makes and the sound of a door bell ... well.

 

Thank you, Nenita!!

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» left by Jim Johnson ⁽¹¹²⁾ (3 days 10 hours ago.)

Scary very good.

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (1 day 5 hours ago.)

Thank you, Jim, I appreciate it!

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» left by Anonymous from dana point (3 days 9 hours ago.)

I was interested. What happens next? Does he know how to shoot that pistol?

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» left by Ken McCreless ^(1,693)
Ken McCreless (1 day 5 hours ago.)

Yes, he does. Well enough to off himself.

 

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